Larry's+Wanderings_hot+discussions

=Discussion=

I suggest Maria should use green colour for filling tenses and SaglaraG should use red for correction and ideas

Vic_B
Larry the cat has a great past. He was born in Hastings, a small town on the southern part of England. He hadn`t got a master, so Larry had to gain the food by himself. On the coast of Hastings there were so many seagulls and the seagulls were Larry`s favourite meal. It`s not easy to catch them but Larry accomodated and became the best among other cats. That`s why he has a strong chase-drive and hunting instinct. But someday Larry in his regular time caught a seagull and he had enjoyed his meal but... In a few hours Larry had had a strong stomach ache. He was really sick, he couldn`t eat anything then he figured out that it was food-poisoning. Larry had recovered in a few days and decided to leave that poisoned place. He understood that all the meal around is poisoned. But Larry didn`t know where to go and once he passed by a cafe and watched on the TV a huge city named London, there was a program about homeless animals. It said that the government had been catching animals and getting them to the place where they cared, fed and everything. Larry without loosing a minute ran away from Hastings.

= Mariya_B = The way to the capital was long and dangerous. Earlier Larry has had no idea the world was so wonderful. As soon as Hastings left behind his shoulders, Larry met some group of teenagers. The boys noticed homeless cat and decided to eat him, as they also were homeless and just wandered. They were trying to catch him during an hour, but the cat was so clever, and the boys had failed at all. Finally Larry took pity of the boys and decided them to come with him. Because he was sure that if there is a place for homeless animals, then it is sure to be such place for children. The boys were happy and they all stsrted to the better life.

Saglara_G
At last they have reached London! It is a wonderful, beautiful city with many sights and friendly people the only one hope for Larry. However, he has to part company with the boys, who knows what waits for them here, may be happiness, family or disappoinment; in spite of this Larry is set positively. Our hero has found that promising place, but suddenly he meet on his way the boy, who has noticed Larry decided to take him. Larry was an unusually clever and handsome cat, so that the boy's parents didn't raise objections to it. From that day Larry's beautiful life begun. He had everything he want, eat, friends and first of all family.

Vic_B
I think it`s not good idea about eating the cat by the group of hungry teens. besides, I think, not only in London there were shelters for children, but in many cities, including Hastings, especially in such a developed country as England. so, I suggest another version: Larry knew Hastings very well as it was small town. He realized that it would be too difficult, too exhausted to run by himself besides, knew how to get to the station.. When the cat got he sliped through the guard he jumped on the train to London without being noticed. In a half and hour beautiful, fantastic London was opened to Larry`s eyes. The same way without being noticed Larry jumped on the bus and had an opportunity to contemplate a lot of sights of London like London Eye, Big Ben, Trafagar Square. He got out of the bus on Downing Street 10. From that moment Larry`s new life had begun.

= Mariya_B = I don't think the idea is bad. At least it's interesting and we need some action so the story would be not so boring. Besides, it's clear that such shelters are in every big cities, but the fact is that Larry went to London ! Any way, we should complete our stories.

Saglara_G
I agree with Mariya, because I think that we shouldn't forget that it is a group work,so everybody can write whatever he wants, and everybody has his own opinion.So please don't quarrel girls)))

Vic_B
Oh, please, do not think I`m arguing or quarreling=) I completely glad to see the final version of the story)