Memoirs+of+the+Mouser


 * Memoirs of the Mouser **

Beginning my narration about the prominent deeds for sake of the safety of all the thing in the house I would like to introduce myself: I’m a cat, my name is Larry. The way I live // has been // full with everyday stress, labor and responsibility due to the straggle against evil and terrible dangerous mice and some other ignoble creatures. Not so long ago one of them // had got // impudent enough to step on the ancient carpet in the dining room belonging to my master. You could not imagine how unusual I felt when I //was observing// such a picture: a dirty, stupid mouse on this precious carpet! You know that it was the last day for this animal… One day another one took an opportunity to eat the beautiful cheese which I am myself not allowed to eat very often, but they do not even understand that the food which // has been touched // is not food and cheese is worth nothing anymore… Such wreckers should be themselves eaten firstly. But the last of my accomplishment cannot be compared with the value of any carpet and any cheese. One of these horrible things //had entered// the study aiming some papers of state importance and put its paws on a document. The documents //were lying// quietly and silently on the table when they got suddenly endangered. Thanks God I persecuted this mouse for some time but wanted just to find out what did it want in such a place. So, I believe that I need even an assistant cat to make the house absolutely safe.

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GelaGelka wonderful! i liked the idea about his emoyions and thoughts a good vocabulary I wish you to extend this memoirs

Like your story! Really like it, because of the language (honestly, so much new words for me) you used and the style. Sometimes I feel like a very noble and blue-blooded cat is telling about his life. He is very responsible, and we can be sure, he will do his best. You know, you could make him not so cruel, but still he is a guardian. Such fascinating memoirs of the Mouser!

Thank you, IKermenka