Larry+and+Maisie

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Let's discuss! Shall we choose a love story or detective story? I think it would be easier and more interesting for us to choose a love story. For example: Larry was catching mouse for Maisie's favor. or Larry felt in love with Maisie and she did'nt pay attention to him while he had caught the mouse for her. :D

Hi ! I’m Maisie. And I’m a cat. Not just a simple cat, but I’m a robber-cat ! I like all that is shine. I mean I like jewelry and precious things. I’m an expert in my deal. So if you need to filch something very, very expensive, just let me know. And I want to tell you one story, which happened with me one day when I was on my trick. I almost did my job, as one stupid guy snatched my stolen thing out of my paws! It was a cat! Of course I pursued it! I was furious! It’s like when somebody take away your milk, but if somebody don’t like milk, he’ll probably not understand my emotional condition at that very time. Anyway, the only thing that I knew it was that I must catch it and bring back my precious! It’s my city and nobody can run away from me. It was a quick guy, but not enough ^_^ At last I caught it, I just blocked its way. I didn’t see its face before, but when I saw, I recognized it! It was the skilfullest robber world ever knew! It was our first meeting. I didn’t know him by myself, but I heard a lot of him. I heard that his last trick finished unsuccessfully, so that he had to be on the run. Of course, he is very artful, but not in this case. (Marina).

It happened last summer. I had a lot of debts and I decided to rub the bank. I had a plan which I was thinking about for 3 month. At that time I thought everything is going to be awesome and nothing can stops me. The day I decide to rub the bank came. I prepared everything and was a little bit nervous. I had bad feeling but anyway I had to go and rub the bank because Egg told me that tomorrow will be the last day to give him his money back and if I wouldn’t pay my debts he will kill me. So anyway I had nothing to loose. It was the second day the Faberge egg was in our town. The beginning was as I planned but when I entered the bank I discovered that somebody already narcotize the security. I was disappointed. How dare somebody to overtake me! And I heard somebody’s tricky laugh. I hid under the table and saw how a black beautiful cat trying to leave the bank. The first time I saw her I felt in love with this graceful cat. Time stopped and I was watching how she walking with my Faberge egg. I thought that She and egg looks so good! But stop! It was my plan! It supposed to be my egg! No matter how good they looks with each other it will cost me my life. I jumped from the table and took the egg. She didn’t expect me to be there so it was very easy to take the egg from her paws. It was the first time I saw her eyes they were full of distraction. I was trying to went away from her but she was very fast. She stands in front of me and introduced herself. Her name was Maisie.(Zanda)

Larry and Maisie! My best friends and best robbers! How are they not acquainted yet? If they will work together they will be like Bonnie and Clyde! And with their help I will become a richest man ever! But what is the plan? Oh, I forgot! Larry owes me an enormous sum! I must tell him that he must steal an Faberge for me. And Maisie? She work just for herself… Ohh, ohh, I got it! I must blurt out to her about Faberge and she will go for it. Yeah! That is the plan! I’m a genius! But what if they won't be successful? How will i live without them? Oh... They are just robbers! Forget about them! But why? They are free for now. Oh, right! I should call Larry...

- Larry, My friend! How are you? - I see, good! Fine, glad you cares) - Listen, i was thinking about the money you owes me... yes! yes! that money) wait... i'm telling you that you can give them back ni one night! I know that in our bank there are Faberge egg which will be there till tommorow evening... you have one chance... you will give it to me and you are in no debt, in other case i will kill you, i promise. - See you soon, lad...

and a call to Maisie ))))

- Maisie, my dear! Where are you? How are you? Having some deal? - No? Oh... pitty. - No, no, nothing, i'm just worrying about some Faberge, such a wonderfull jewelry... - Okay, okay, you got me! Such a strong lady... And you know how to convience peolpe. - It will be where till tommorow's evening, you have one chance... - Will you show it to me after? - Have a good deal. Se you soon baby. (Donir) (Made one out of two. From the Egg's point of view)

i wish you to write more!!

 * IKermenka **

My two stars and a wish:

I like the way you guys have written the story!) one event from different points of view. Very exciting! And the plot of the story is unusual: love story of two robber cats. Wether it is a love story, or it is an action story?..

My wish is to write about their feelings more. It might be interesting to know.

thank u!)

** Dasha_O **
My two stars and a wish

Your story is very absorbing))) I liked the depiction of their first meeting and how enjoyable you describe the action. And as it is a love story, my wish is to add the dialog between Maisie and Larry and to finish it with the happy end)))

= Mariya_B =

My 2 stars and a wish

Well, girls, your stories are wonderful! The first thing I like is that you have chosen the genre of a love story. Secondly you have great imagination! And I wish you to try the stories be written in the genre of detective! : )))))